tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5735627427140332330.post3169150919448162330..comments2023-09-01T05:37:36.213-07:00Comments on Laura Lynn ~enter into my world: Sweet WavesLaura Lynnhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02063154517087393398noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5735627427140332330.post-4795514843083775482011-07-17T16:26:37.461-07:002011-07-17T16:26:37.461-07:00I so love this piece... the pain, yet the energize...I so love this piece... the pain, yet the energized carefree mood of the last stanza. A powerful transition, leaving the cries to continue into the abyss of him.Reflectionshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09655163868990155242noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5735627427140332330.post-23139004581125814952011-07-17T12:44:07.045-07:002011-07-17T12:44:07.045-07:00so sad she couldn't find peace in the ocean..b...so sad she couldn't find peace in the ocean..but then the carefree mood of the last stanza after the howling and him, touching her and everything changed...beautifulClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5735627427140332330.post-78407489713751737722011-07-17T12:34:23.981-07:002011-07-17T12:34:23.981-07:00My goodness... Brian mentions it.
"She dips ...My goodness... Brian mentions it. <br />"She dips into the ocean<br />in a quick<br />fluent motion<br />kicking water into the air."<br />The lead into that passage, and the passage itself... brilliant. Thank you Laura Lynn. Great subtlety, literally at play.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5735627427140332330.post-1705093725531843582011-07-17T12:12:26.378-07:002011-07-17T12:12:26.378-07:00smiles...love the carefree playfulness of the last...smiles...love the carefree playfulness of the last stanza and the image of her dancing kicking the waves up into the air...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.com