Tuesday, November 9, 2010

Can I, Will I

I must face him
In the morning,
My nerves growing,
My heart
Beating faster
With the thought of him.
Can I
Will I
Have the strength
To face him?
Must I face him?
Weakness
Harbors in my stomach
Eagerness
Setting in,
To see him
To smell him.
Fear overcoming
From the thought
Of him being near
His touch so close.
Can I
Will I
Have the strength
To face him?

6 comments:

  1. love the progression it speeds up then the brakes seem to slow it down before the answer is apparent.

    Like the flow and work usage

    Thanks for sharing with One Shot

    Moon smiles

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  2. such emotion...it leaves one wondering...can she?

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  3. Lots of mystery and angst here.

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  4. i guess that depends on what tonight entails...smiles. nice one shot!

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  5. I felt for you. I think you have captured a feeling most of us have experienced. it is so beautifully minimalist.

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  6. Dear Laura
    I enjoyed it so much.. your beautiful words "Fear overcoming
    From the thought
    Of him being near"
    got me....
    Thanks for sharing....

    ॐ नमः शिवाय
    Om Namah Shivaya
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