has quickly
descended into
the night
that has
awakened as
I slowly close
my back door
signing a
goodnight to
the struggle
of the day
when I hear
the thunder
echo in
the distance
wondering if
there will be
a storm
on this
quite night
for I feel
I need
a storm
and as
I think
I see the
glow of
lighting from
the shaded
window just
as the rain
drops hit
the pane
with breath
of sigh
the storm
has arrived.
Hey there. Good stuff...
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oh there are times i have need of a storm
ReplyDeleteto shake the world and leave the freshness of its
scouring...
The storm certainly has it's place in our lives. This is beautiful Laura and so is your blog. :-)
ReplyDeleteHi, Laura Lynn. I love your meter in this one. It frames your words well and helps to create a suspenseful mood. Needs an edit..."there will be a storm on this (quite) night." (quiet?:) I like your stuff and hope that you're still writing it. -- Tom
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