Thursday, September 30, 2010
Black Mask Disguise
I see your cloak
In a crowded room,
Your face
Releasing the light
Into the inevitable gloom.
The scar in your eyes
Sees
Behind
My black mask disguise
And all self control
Leaves the room.
I move through the crowd
The voices carry; loud
Needing to
Need to reach.....
You.
I see your cloak,
black;
Moving through the voices
Moving away.
My cry breaks the room,
Your eyes
Falling upon my open disguise
Feeding into my tomb.
Pearl white fingers
Reach for me
Shadows rise
Tears set in my eyes,
I dare not move.
I feel blind
In the by and by
Waiting for the cry
Until I feel your hand in mine,
In the mist of the crowd;
Voices no longer loud.
The room is still
In the silence I feel
Your face
Releasing the light
And the scar in your eyes
See
past my
Black mask disguise.
copyright 2010
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like i have stated before - you are an excellent poet...really like the flow of the whole piece...bkm
ReplyDeletewonderful flow...the scar in your eyes...allowing to see beyond...very nice one shot!
ReplyDeleteSo many need someone to see beyond the mask...and hold a hand. And those with scars who have been healed, can do this very thing.
ReplyDeleteI'm with BKM you are quite the poet. Nice one shot. Love and Light, Sender
ReplyDeleteYou ahve done a wonderful job,.. I enjoyed every word of it... Laura and loved the last part... thanks for sharing..
ReplyDeleteॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
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oh wow.. this is beautiful.. Quite the poem here! The scar seeing past the mask, such a lovely thought! :)
ReplyDeleteMy One Shot Is Here
W O W
ReplyDeletethat's a meeting. I can see so cleartly that weet encounter
Loved this oNE!
D.
Thanks for stopping by everyone and for your wonderful comments. I have enjoyed visiting your blogs!
ReplyDeleteMelissa Campbell, you have it! That is exactly what we all need!
Beyond the mask lives a real person, who can be visible even with a scar in the eye!
ReplyDeleteGreat piece!
Strong, ethereal-dark visuals on this.
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