I see his delicate fingers
Rough, smooth, and bare
His eyes piercing
Gentle but fierce.
Lips smooth, round, electric
Body, medium, solid, escentric
Skin, soft, firm
Giving a fire inside to burn
A yearn,
An attraction, a love, to rise
A continuing fire
That only his presence can subside.
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I see him the way you see him,
ReplyDeletelovely piece.
I am working on placing your link to Jingle Poetry blog roll,
ReplyDeleteI have been occupied by so many stuff, sorry for being late. it will appear within a week.
your poetry rocks.
keep it coming...
write a poem related to 7 sins, link to our potluck today.
Thanks for the support.
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ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for the support to Jingle Poetry Potluck, I could not always find time to show how much we appreciate your support, here, three awards for you, hope to see you in of week 7, our theme is love and romance. Happy Monday, Happy Blogging! xxx
Enjoyed this one. The descriptive poetry is well-played.. electric lips nicely uncliched.
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Luke @ WordSalad
Welcome to our potluck week 10, a poetry award is assigned upon submission.
ReplyDeleteOld poems are welcome …hurry up, you have 12 hours to go before we are closed.
Hope to see you there. Cheers!
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