I feel for your lips
In the dark
Feeling your skin
Stuck within,
Waiting, needing it
To
Release me.
I have a prison
Built within,
Buried inside you
Needing to
Break within.
For I am in flames!
I'm in flames!
Burning inside of you
Consumed by this sin
Waiting for your skin
To
Release me.
I feel your kiss
In this darken void,
Feeling your heart beat
Submitting to your heat.
It is burning
I am burning,
Only you can subside,
Only you can subside.
For I am in Flames!
I'm in flames!
Inside of you
To break me from this sin
And waiting for your skin
To
Release me.
copyright 2010
give your thoughts on this poem. I'm not completely satisfied with it as of yet.
I have submitted this on jingle poetry. http://www.jinglepoetry.blogspot.com
Friday, July 23, 2010
Tuesday, July 20, 2010
Motivation
I am having a motivation crisis! I have all of these thoughts jumbling around in my head but no motivation to put them down. I don't even want to. I actually want to go to sleep. I think there is something wrong with me. Someone help me please!
Maybe a bike ride this evening will help???
Maybe a bike ride this evening will help???
Tuesday, July 13, 2010
Poetry Today
Should I be worried for my poetry by entering into this new world of poetry? I have been reading a lot of the current poetry today, wondering what happened to actual, classic poetry. A lot of it seems to be in story form. I feel like I'm reading a story and not poetry. The new generation of poetry has lost all rhythm, flow, and beauty.
I fear that my poetry will not meet the new standards that has generated for poetry. I am lost when reading it. I have no idea what the the writer is talking about, expressing, or visualizing. I can not enter into the poet's world, for I am lost at lines added that shouldn't be added. However, these poets are receiving awards and publication.
In my opinion it is not a poem unless it can flow and has a rhythm to it. I am not talking about rhyming I am talking about rhythm. I was taught that a poem not matter what style, needs rhythm.
There are great poets out in the world but are they going unnoticed? Do we all need to subject our style and rhythm to the new generation standards in order to be noticed? This new generation of poetry has corrupted the beauty that once was poetry. It is disgusting!
I fear that my poetry will not meet the new standards that has generated for poetry. I am lost when reading it. I have no idea what the the writer is talking about, expressing, or visualizing. I can not enter into the poet's world, for I am lost at lines added that shouldn't be added. However, these poets are receiving awards and publication.
In my opinion it is not a poem unless it can flow and has a rhythm to it. I am not talking about rhyming I am talking about rhythm. I was taught that a poem not matter what style, needs rhythm.
There are great poets out in the world but are they going unnoticed? Do we all need to subject our style and rhythm to the new generation standards in order to be noticed? This new generation of poetry has corrupted the beauty that once was poetry. It is disgusting!
Random thought for the day
The air cool, warm
Settling on the skin,
Tingling the nerves.
The sensation
mesmerizing.
copyright 2010
Settling on the skin,
Tingling the nerves.
The sensation
mesmerizing.
copyright 2010
Kentucky Weather
I love Kentucky weather and for those that do not know me, I'm being sarcastic. It has stormed all day, flooding the streets and flooding my dept at my work. Now the sun is shining like it never stormed at all. At least it is cool.....around the 70s, which is really nice considering the horrible heat wave we have had the past few weeks. The humidity is also down...surprising for Kentucky. As they always say in if you don't like the weather in KY wait 20 minutes and it will change.
Sunday, July 11, 2010
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