Wednesday, January 12, 2011

All I want

All I want
to do is see you face,
Everyday watching
for you
needing you.
All I want
is to hear your voice
hear you say
my name,
everyday waiting
for you
needing you.
All I want
is to smell you
as you stand so close
watching for your smile
waiting for your touch.
All I want
is to see your face
to look for you
to be with you,
for that is all I want,
All I want
All I want
is you
everyday.
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15 comments:

  1. AnonymousJanuary 12, 2011 at 5:13 PM

    Longing...a feeling I think we can all sympathize with, and certainly one I know all too well. In love, never wishing to be away from a person, or desiring to be with a person that may or may not share such visions with you.

    Here's hoping you get what and who you want!

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  2. Laura LynnJanuary 12, 2011 at 6:06 PM

    Thanks for such a sweet comment

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  3. katrinJanuary 12, 2011 at 6:32 PM

    i know, it's always like that, except when it's not :)

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  4. Brian MillerJanuary 12, 2011 at 6:49 PM

    hot....i am glad you included smell as that is right up my alley...smiles. hope you get your wish...

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  5. Laura LynnJanuary 12, 2011 at 7:00 PM

    Thanks Brian but this poem was written a little while ago, so my wish did not come true. I'm glad you agree with smell...everything is nothing without the smell to bloom the memory.

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  6. ReflectionsJanuary 12, 2011 at 7:23 PM

    The longing of the touch, the smell, the look from even across the spasm of a room full of people. Love is wonderful, isn't it?

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  7. dustusJanuary 12, 2011 at 7:34 PM

    Can relate to the obsessive quality of when someone is always in your thoughts. The repetition draws it out well.

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  8. signed...bkmJanuary 12, 2011 at 8:37 PM

    yes agree with dustus..that obsessive self talk when we have one the takes our thoughts away from everything and anything around us....bkm

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  9. AndreasJanuary 13, 2011 at 11:13 AM

    this poem makes me uneasy, perhaps because i hear myself in it's voice. skillfully done.

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  10. AnonymousJanuary 14, 2011 at 2:26 AM

    I hear you, girl! This one really resonates with me!! The romantic in me keeps saying these words.. (though not as beautifully as you just did)

    Love love love this, Laura!!

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  11. AnonymousJanuary 17, 2011 at 4:09 AM

    :P Hmmm...now that reminded me of something...I been weighing this thought for a while, wonderfully written=P

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  12. Gigi AnnJanuary 19, 2011 at 7:59 PM

    I too, like the line 'all I want is to smell you'. Just a smell, or song, can bring back what I thought were long forgotten memories. Nicely put.

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  13. Dulçe ♥January 20, 2011 at 5:45 AM

    I want to want that too!
    Great one LAura!

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  14. moondustwriterJanuary 20, 2011 at 7:05 PM

    mmm I like this. when there is someone you love who takes your breath away it should be ~ all you want...

    thanks for your visit and your sweet comment

    smiles

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  15. Steve IsaakJanuary 25, 2011 at 2:34 AM

    Builds/progresses effectively, this. Good work.

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