Thursday, December 23, 2010

A Soul In It's Cry - A Haiku

Tearing, staining eyes
of a broken heart feeding
A soul in its cry.

4 comments:

  1. Those are HEAVy words
    how can so much be said in just a few words-- that sadness- at least the heart ,though broken, is feeding that soul so that it does not vanish completely- not today, please!

    Merry Xmas sweet lady poet
    ;)

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  2. Thanks for your kind words! It is amazing to have so much meaning with so few words. Hakiu can be very freeing

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