Thursday, December 23, 2010

A Soul In It's Cry - A Haiku

Tearing, staining eyes
of a broken heart feeding
A soul in its cry.


  1. Those are HEAVy words
    how can so much be said in just a few words-- that sadness- at least the heart ,though broken, is feeding that soul so that it does not vanish completely- not today, please!

    Merry Xmas sweet lady poet

  2. Thanks for your kind words! It is amazing to have so much meaning with so few words. Hakiu can be very freeing

  3. sad,
    hope you well..

    powerful job.

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