Wednesday, May 25, 2011

Fallen

Fallen
laying in the mud
in blood
sent up from
this feeble earth.

Ripped; torn
dirty and scorned
I weep
here in the mud
in my blood
to reap
the agony
of my sanity.

written 07-09-10 revised 05/25/11 posted to onestop poetry 05/25/11 for Oneshotwednesday

4 comments:

  1. yikes...hope this is of a previous time...if not i hope you get up... : (

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  2. powerful, raw.

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  3. What a great piece... love the raw feel... the urgency. Great header photo!

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  4. wow!! A superbly intense write..
    And frankly, I just hope this is fiction!!

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