She fades
into the sigh
the past into the sigh
the future drowning
emotions running
of vertigo,
for her
in this game
of Domino
waiting for her fall
to collapse
in dreams
like a golden god,
letting go
into a spiral vertigo,
for her
in this game
of Domino
pieces standing
after the sorrow
into the dawn
of tomorrow
after the woe
of domino
will he wait
#Dversepoets
Hopefully the game falls to an end and he awaits, never can tell sometimes
ReplyDeleteif it is real, he will...hard to know what all the dominos start to fall....but after you will know.
ReplyDeleteLove this piece. Very unnerving, to me at least. :-)
ReplyDeleteI've had a bout of vertigo in the past and this emotional vertigo describes it perfectly, as applied to a relationship!
ReplyDeleteThis piece came from a powerful place. I liked it.
ReplyDeleteReally liked how this piece builds to the final
ReplyDelete"will he wait"
The question suspended, unanswered.
Well penned!
Some people wait on anothers sorrow...how sad that we can not wait on their joy and triumph...you venture into a deep place..well done...bkm
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