Tuesday, November 12, 2013

Domino

She fades
into the sigh
the past
is haunting
the future drowning
emotions running
all spinning
into a moment
of vertigo,
will he wait
for her
in this game
of Domino
pieces standing
waiting for her fall
to collapse
shattering her
in dreams
that undress
in the night
turning into
balls of light
as the sun rises
like a golden god,
emotions running
letting go
into a spiral vertigo,
will he wait
for her
in this game
of Domino
pieces standing
waiting for her fall
will he wait
for her
after the sorrow
into the dawn
of tomorrow
after the woe
of this game
of domino
will he wait

#Dversepoets

7 comments:

  1. Hopefully the game falls to an end and he awaits, never can tell sometimes

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  2. if it is real, he will...hard to know what all the dominos start to fall....but after you will know.

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  3. Love this piece. Very unnerving, to me at least. :-)

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  4. I've had a bout of vertigo in the past and this emotional vertigo describes it perfectly, as applied to a relationship!

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  5. This piece came from a powerful place. I liked it.

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  6. Really liked how this piece builds to the final
    "will he wait"
    The question suspended, unanswered.
    Well penned!

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  7. Some people wait on anothers sorrow...how sad that we can not wait on their joy and triumph...you venture into a deep place..well done...bkm

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