Spinning earth
Gulps me away
In a circle
In a pattern
I can not break free from.
Leaves green with spring
Grass soft from rain
Wind gentle and warm
Brushing my skin
Ever so softly
Ever so softly
Cooling to the touch
Raising every nerve
Sending a tingling sensation
Through every course of
My body.
Rain drops,
Softly, cooling, soundly
All around
All around
In a circle
In a pattern
Across my skin
Now wet with life
Seeping into
Nature's mysterious soul
To be
My serenity!
Nice choice for One Shot!
ReplyDeleteI see a mandala in my head when I read this...wholeness, journey to yhe true self...
..now wet with life...like this!
ReplyDeleteI love rains and I loved this so much.. specially the last lines...
ReplyDelete"Across my skin
Now wet with life
Seeping into
Nature's mysterious soul
To be
My serenity!"
It was so beautifully sensuous and fantastic imagery...
ॐ नमः शिवाय
Om Namah Shivaya
Twitter: @VerseEveryDay
Blog: http://shadowdancingwithmind.blogspot.com
Thanks for the wonderful comments everyone! Shashi that is one of my favorite parts of the poem. It has such a meaning in my life.
ReplyDelete