Your comment made me re-count my syllables like 5 times. I think I have 7 on the second line. I dunno. Hakius are not my forte. I think you are one syllable short on your second line. Don't take my word on it though....I don't know what I'm talking about. :)
Haiku in response:
The soul is crushed, torn lost without its mate, needing its love ever more.
a heart too heavy
ReplyDeleteto hold such a message
pulls violin strings
ha, jk, i did not count sylables on mine...this is heart felt though....
Your comment made me re-count my syllables like 5 times. I think I have 7 on the second line. I dunno. Hakius are not my forte. I think you are one syllable short on your second line. Don't take my word on it though....I don't know what I'm talking about. :)
ReplyDeleteHaiku in response:
The soul is crushed, torn
lost without its mate, needing
its love ever more.