Sunday, June 5, 2011

A Sea Carrrying Death - A Haiku

A cry through the moor,
a sea carrying death
of a love never more.


  1. a heart too heavy
    to hold such a message
    pulls violin strings

    ha, jk, i did not count sylables on mine...this is heart felt though....

  2. Your comment made me re-count my syllables like 5 times. I think I have 7 on the second line. I dunno. Hakius are not my forte. I think you are one syllable short on your second line. Don't take my word on it though....I don't know what I'm talking about. :)

    Haiku in response:

    The soul is crushed, torn
    lost without its mate, needing
    its love ever more.