Saturday, July 2, 2011

Never Let Your Dreams Die

This is one of the first poems I ever wrote. I think I was about 10. Should I leave it or re-write it?


Never let your dreams die
no matter what they are,
Life can be a big strife
but never let your dreams die.
If you let your dreams die
it could be the ending of a life.

posted for Friday Poetically for One Stop Poetry with Brian Miller
Posted by at

4 comments:

  1. AnonymousJuly 2, 2011 at 1:28 PM

    I say its a strong message...leave it. Its powerful just the way it is.

    ReplyDelete
  2. Umesh RaoJuly 2, 2011 at 7:49 PM

    Very nice :)
    And so thoughtful and meaningful poetry at an age of 10!!
    Leave it as it is, its too good.
    One of the most beautiful poems I have read :)
    Thanks for sharing!

    ReplyDelete
  3. Brian MillerJuly 2, 2011 at 8:45 PM

    a good bit o truth in there...you realising this at age 10 is a bit mind boggling...for many it takes years to understand....

    ReplyDelete
  4. M. RekaSeptember 29, 2011 at 7:34 AM

    True talk...Love your poetry!

    Short Poems

    ReplyDelete

Subscribe to: Post Comments (Atom)