Saturday, July 2, 2011

Never Let Your Dreams Die

This is one of the first poems I ever wrote. I think I was about 10. Should I leave it or re-write it?

Never let your dreams die
no matter what they are,
Life can be a big strife
but never let your dreams die.
If you let your dreams die
it could be the ending of a life.

posted for Friday Poetically for One Stop Poetry with Brian Miller


  1. I say its a strong message...leave it. Its powerful just the way it is.

  2. Very nice :)
    And so thoughtful and meaningful poetry at an age of 10!!
    Leave it as it is, its too good.
    One of the most beautiful poems I have read :)
    Thanks for sharing!

  3. a good bit o truth in realising this at age 10 is a bit mind boggling...for many it takes years to understand....